Wednesday 11 September 2013

COLOUR SCRIPT // Plot - Panel Set Up - IN PROGRESS


PANEL LAYOUT


1.     OPEN SHOT: dark stage, outline of oak tree (dawn)
2.     INTRO SHOT (Codaville): spotlight on oak tree
3.     spotlight pours into Oakley's room, onto Oak's bed covered by quilt
4.     metronome (1)
5.     INTRO SHOT (Young Oakley): sitting up in bed putting on red socks, soak in red
6.     metronome (2)
7.     INTRO SHOT (Teen Oakley): putting on red shirt, soak in red
8.     metronome (1)
9.     INTRO SHOT (Present Oakley): pulling suspender over shoulder, soak in red
10.   TITLE CARD: Oak's shirt (very faint pinstripe), suspender in place, buttons - "OFF THE TRACK"   
11.   Oak at bottom of oak tree
12.   Oak walking through town / instruments warming up
13.   INTRO SHOT (Ela): peaking out of curtain at edge of town, soak in red
14.   INTRO SHOT (Outside curtain): peak through to light greens and browns
15.   Oak pulls Ela back to Codaville/red
16.   Musical Town number (1), soak in red
17.   Musical Town number (2), soak in red
18.   Oak and Ela (bring back blue) peak through curtain again
19.   INTRO SHOT (Marco + Polo): dumbstruck faces
20.   Sneaking Marco into Codaville as stagehand
21.   Town against Oak / Marco breaking metronome
22.   Town reaction (shock)
23.   Town reaction (anger)
24.   INTRO SHOT (Forest, lost): Trio wandering
25.   INTRO SHOT (NiceTown): general
26.   INTRO SHOT (Mimi): through a cloud of pink
27.   INTRO SHOT (Musos, background): Chorus + Mimi musical number
28.   Something goes wrong, angry NiceTown
29.   INTRO SHOT (Forest, escape) Group escaping
30.   INTRO SHOT (Factory) Ext. doors, slightly ajar
31.   INTRO SHOT (Old Factory Man) w/ metronome
32.   INTRO SHOT (Car) group, happy, colours
33.   INTRO SHOT (RealTown) Music shop
34.   Marco and Oak w/ jukebox, muted colours
35.   Marco and Oak w/ record player, much more muted colours
36.   Marco and Oak fall out, hardly any colours
37.   GROUP SPLIT: Marco still in REALTOWN (watching old house from afar)
38.   INTRO SHOT (Sports Camp) Oak sees (sports) players singing, saturated colours, metronome?
39.   Ela and Mimi (doing something) 
40.   Oak: (another sports) players singing more so, saturated, metronome?
41.   Marco: walking away from house, muted
42.   GROUP REUNITE (where?) 
43.   INTRO SHOT (Acapella Mansion) Car breaks down, dark
44.   INTRO SHOT (Chorus Members, background) Group inside mansion, Ela in front
45.   INTRO SHOT (Antki): hand shoots out from under stairs w/ eyes
46.   INTRO SHOT (Proshka): w/ instruments to go
47.   INTRO SHOT (The Orchestra Pit): Outside, group, bright, metronome
48.   Huge ass organ, inception-like faces
49.   Group finds metronomes, picks one 
50.   FOREST: group heads back
51.   CODAVILLE
52.   Oak: kick ass musical number
53.   Realisation, Oak leaves town
54.   Group reunites, Oak pulls off red socks
55.   Group hug?
56.   Still loosely connected, look through forest trees and paths, grinning
57.   (BIRDS EYE) showing pathways and trees making the shape of a huge oak tree
58.   CLOSING SHOT: dark, faint outline of oak tree paths